I made my world fall at ur feet;
I loafed around for you in the scorching heat,
I fell for ur eyes & ur charming smile;
I still repent it happily every once in a while.
Seeing any beautiful girl made my eyes to blink;
But you were the one who made my heart to think,
My life was barren,high and dry;
You came along and made me fly,
It is true that you have cut my wings;
But we’ll always be attached to my hearts strings.
The sweet moments given will be cherished;
The painful ones will slowly get perished,
I will keep waiting for u like the mile stone;
But deep inside,I know from today you’ll be gone.
This is really a very good write.. nice rhymic expressions.. :)
ReplyDeletethank me for dis one..:D
ReplyDeletei sincerely thank ghoda ..bcoz it`s his emotions and feelings i put into words....
ReplyDeletedis 1 was written the night before our final exam of 8th sem at about 1 am.....no doubt we flopped in environmental...
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