Tuesday, August 17, 2010

LOVE HURTS

In the ways of love i hav proven 2 be a greenhorn;
i feel like i`m lost in the world lovelorn,
then i decided out of my heart u need to be thrown;
but the thought of it had my heart into a zillion pieces torn.

what`s 4 u a mistake,is 2 me hope and belief;
what`s 2 u irritation and agony,4 me is relief,
basically the ways of this world are two;
one is unacceptable to me,the other unacceptable 2 u.

sometimes i feel it all should have never started;
for i feel like without u i`m a bit retarded,
neither would we have met and then parted;
nor would i have ever been BROKEN HEARTED.

7 comments:

  1. I dont know much about the feel.. coz i have never been heart broken.. :P

    but u got a gud hand and a gud pen.. keep writing..

    "basically the ways of this world are two;
    one is unacceptable to me,the other unacceptable 2 u."

    this is what touched me a lot.. :)

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  2. @sid: i know it really hurts... But v r wid u always...

    @amit: Abe tera heart aur kese kese tutne k baad tu feel karega?????????

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  3. @amit: tate au kahiki labha nahi....

    @puchu: kahinki emiti hauchu kahilu....mo bhalia rahunu bindaas.

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  4. @ Bibhuti.. tu kahuchu kana.. ora gote 2 ta mate dai dela ta kama badhanta.. :)

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  5. @amit--sikha ku to neichu..au daunu...au kahaku debi??

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  6. @amit: neighbour ra kukuda upare akhi pakana..

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  7. @ animesh - are kukuda ta mo favourite.. kukuda khaiba re jau maja.. au kauthire nahi sanga.. :P :P :P

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